Behind medicines
and cosmetics that people are using in everyday life, there are a great number
of animals suffering from great pains and itchiness imposed by humans.
Today, approximately
100 million of animals are used for Animal Testing around the world (NAVS). The
purpose of these testing involved animals can be classified into three main
categories―to
advance scientific research, to study disease and develop medicine and to
confirm the safety of chemicals. Owing to these researches, people could discover
effective preventives and treatments for diseases such as rheumatoid arthritis,
polio and hepatitis C. The results of animal testing have also been prevented
people from facing harmful effects of products (NCB).
{I need something to change the main topic
into animal testing for products!!!!!!}
It is true that Animal Testing confirm
the safety of products people use, however, the experiment inflict great pain
on animals. Even though the testing is needed for people not to be hurt by
using products, is it humane not to take measures to diminish animals’ pain coased
by the experiment and just sacrifice them? In order to improve treatment of
animals involved in Animal Testing for products, Japanese government should
obligate companies 1) to promote its treatment according to the principle of
“3Rs” (Replacement, Reduction, Refinement)and 2)to improve the availability of information
related to Animal Testing.
Basically a nice intro, Kana! Good use of an image to start.
返信削除As you wrote, some statistic or fact related to product testing would be a good addition.
Your outline also looks basically good! Perhaps the regulations of other countries and Japan should only shortly be mentioned in the introduction?? Go into your main argument as quickly as possible.
Good luck with the research and writing and have a great winter break!
Mark